



[Report This]Date: 03/05/2013 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
Now, I want to know Shen's history and if there is more to this beginning.




[Report This]Date: 07/03/2012 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nice! I'd like to see a sequel to this!
Author's Response:
There's a follow up here: http://ksarchive.com/viewstory.php?sid=2926




[Report This]Date: 04/24/2011 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
You should do a follow up on this. Great story.



[Report This]Date: 04/03/2011 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
There is only one thing I can think to say to tell you how much I enjoyed this story........ MORE!!!
Date: 02/26/2011 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
I hope you add to this soon. It is a very interesting story.




[Report This]Date: 02/26/2011 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
WOW! Very very very good story! UPDATE PLEASE!!!
Date: 02/26/2011 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh my...
Favored.

[Report This]Date: 02/25/2011 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is pretty good but the end really doesn't feel like an end. The whole thing feels more like the first chapter of a longer fic. You left me wanting to see how the relationship between the three grows into a real fmaily.
Author's Response: Like the note says, it's the first in a series.



[Report This]Date: 02/25/2011 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wonderful! I only wish it was a bit longer. I was so sad to have it end. great work.
Author's Response:
Thanks. And there's more. :)
Date: 02/25/2011 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very cool, thanks.
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 02/25/2011 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
Mon-Shen is my personal name. I enjoyed this story immensely.
Author's Response:
Very cool. Am happy you did.