Date: 02/23/2011 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
Aw, that was sweet. I particularly like the way you portrayed the interaction between Kirk, Spock and McCoy at the beginning (although I can't really imagine them settling down for movie night!) - I thought you captured their voices really well. Some post-Miramanee angst would have been nice, but you obviously wanted a happy story, and I liked it, so I'm not complaining!
Well done on your first fic.