Date: 08/03/2011 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
I just read this and "What Are the Odds" last night, and it's been a long time since a fic made me cry. This is heartbreaking in the most satisfying way. I really hope you continue this story, and even if it stays sad for a while, I can't wait to read more.
Date: 03/17/2011 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 7
Good grief, Jim, it sure took you long enough! How can I be so THOROUGHLY in loathe with Jim Kirk right now and still like him? Ugh. Poor Spock must pull through for the sake of Spock. Forget Jim. Hmph. xD
As always, this was an amazing chapter. Please update again soon!
Date: 03/04/2011 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 5
I like to believe that Spock "felt" quite a bit for Pike in TOS, at the very least high regard/hero worship and preferably a serious crush. (I certainly have one of both versions of Pike.)
This chapter adds a nice twist to TOS where Spock rescues a damaged Pike and takes him to Talos by having Pike now rescue a broken Spock in this reality and bringing him to Earth.
Should we take it that Kirk is jealous of Pike and his relationship with Spock? I sure hope so! Look forward to more!
Date: 03/03/2011 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
Pity's sake! no more away missions please!--see what happens. Please remember, your fingers are not your own till you finish the whole thing.
These 3 chapters...a sense of the endless nothing of hopelessness, with highs of despair and lows of total apathy. All too well written.
*hunkered down waiting for next chapter*
Date: 03/01/2011 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 3
I've been a dedicated fanfiction-reader of many fandoms for eight-ish years now. I am honestly not sure if I've ever anticipated updates on a story more than this one. Honestly, that's really saying something. I can obsess with the best of them.
I absolutely adore this story. Spock's not humoring Jim in his little self-loathing pity party and poor, poor Chekhov.
I'll be eagerly awaiting your next chapter.
Date: 02/20/2011 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 2
this isnt complete? Please tell me you have another ending in mind?? Are you open to bribery by chocolate?? :-D. Excellent story, but then, I think Ive loved almost all of your stories!
Bribery by chocolate? Nope - haven't got that much of a sweet tooth.