Date: 03/23/2013 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hi! It's fic and all this series is adorable!
I thik I find pic of Benny and Cutio - http://cs319029.vk.me/v319029621/faa0/upFjfdlPQ_I.jpg
Date: 02/22/2011 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
Excellent. Great solution. The paper thing was a great touch. For anyone who knows cats, that made the kitten so real, and when the comparison was made between the cat and Spock, I almost fell off my chair laughing. So true! I never realized it before! I have a sneaking suspicion that a real Benvolio and Mercutio are wandering the author's home, lol.
They have different names, but they act the same. I'd be lying if I sai dmy little demons play not part in my stories. XD
Date: 02/16/2011 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
That last line looks like a good launching point for a Spock pov of his away time.
I love the kittens. Their personalities are perfect for Jim and Spock. Its sweet that Jim holds Spock's shirt for sleeping.
Date: 02/15/2011 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very cute and sweet. I do wonder if maybe Jim isn't just a bit too much of an emotional wreck, but he's your Jim; you can make him as wrecked as you want. :)
I figure abandonment issues would definitely work against a person like that. This series is the first time I've ever written him as needy and broken like that. I think I just like the cuddling and sappy romance that coes out of it. XD