Reviews For Vigil
Reviewer: oyboh Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2011 8:42 AM Title: None
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Date: 03/26/2011 8:42 AM Title: None
I'm very finicky when it comes to poetry--but this is just beautiful.
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Thanks so much for your feedback - I'm glad you enjoyed it. :-)
Reviewer: Greywolf the Wanderer Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/03/2009 11:31 PM Title: None
Date: 11/03/2009 11:31 PM Title: None
Ahhh... very nice. Captures the desperation -- and the hope.
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Date: 08/24/2008 9:43 AM Title: None
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I really like this poem. The "everything is less than nothing" line and the description of the two of them as the "instigator of miracles" were, I thought, especially effective. I also love the way you intertwined the two separate lines of thought - it gave the poem a slightly desperate tone that was very suitable to its content.