Date: 05/01/2012 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
hehe! dubstep much? This piece of smut-verse ficton has be giggling more than blushing. Especially how Spock ended up doing exactly what Jim envisioned doing (well nearly exactly, minus the vib - because we know how jealous Spock can get over non-sentinent objects being imbedded inside Jim.... XD LOL)
Trust Jim to be so absorbed in his own thoughts, then have Spock come barging through confidently like a locked-on missile. and explode every thought that Jim might have into sparkling shooting stars. See the lights yet Jim? See em? Heheeee~
Very cutely crafted out. I like the nifty words exchanged. and Spock's speech, even though quite litte in this story. Comes out as very Spock, and very very mischeviously snarky at the same time.
*thumbs up with cheshire grins* ^___^
Date: 01/28/2011 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
You manage to keep the endearing but gleefully hot-puppy quality of the Guys in the recent Universe--cool!
Why, thank you. That was my intention, but one never knows if it will succeed.