Reviews For Foreboding
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Reviewer: oyboh Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2011 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 1

It does make you think.

When you get your breath back.

Reviewer: Cutting love Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2011 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 1

oops. moral of the story is: don't assume things in space. Or rescue guys named Khan. That too. *Nodds sagely*

Great fic!

Reviewer: Dahliaxat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2011 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

I was like crap...Khan gets to show up and ruining everything. Wonderfully sweet...Loved it..and yes you are evil but we love you.........



Author's Response:

Well, he won't ruin everything yet, but we all know what happens....Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Greywolf the Wanderer Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2011 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 1

wat!  dude, wait, whut?  oh -- hey, not really pissed at thee, just, I agree with the author over on lj who had Kirk remembering something from old!Spock's mind and killing Khan before he woke up!

I know, good guys, yadda yadda -- but I can hate on Khan if'n I wants to! heh heh...

(looks mutinous, mutters something about &@#$!?! khan...)



Author's Response:

Yes, you are most welcome to hate on Khan. Can we create a story where he ends up with T'Pring? Then they can kill each other and leave our guys alone!

Reviewer: ForgottenOne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2011 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 1

OH!  Oh, you just leave it at Khan??  You're going to open that can of worms and leave us hanging?  I love you.  You're diabolical and evil and I love it.  It brings up memories of "what love will drive a man to" to quote a certain doctor.  Man, now I gotta go watch "Space Seed," "Star Trek II: TWOK" and "Star Trek III: The Search for Spock" all over again.  You rock.  Thanks for a terrific story about our boys and their love for each other.



Author's Response:

Well, it was called "Foreboding." And yes, watching all of the above is a good way to spend time in January.

Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Greywolf the Wanderer Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2011 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 1

you are mean, evil and a thorough scoundrel!!

I quite like that in a person...



Author's Response:

Um, what did I do? This piece was quite middle of the road, compared to much of what I do. And let's face it, Jim should have blown Khan and his ship into a million tiny fragments.

 

Reviewer: Tlema Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2011 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'm just happy that it wasn't permanent. ^.^



Author's Response:

That makes two of us.

Reviewer: putigress2012 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2011 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

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Sweet. Very sweet.

But that last line... *shudders* I always bawl my eyes out at the end of TWOK.



Author's Response:

Yes, that's why I wrote this. I still remember crying in the theater when I saw TWOK for the first time.

Reviewer: MyriadProBold Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2011 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

Damn! That awesome. The final line has so much foreboding. Wow.

Author's Response:

Precisely. If Jim had known, he would have blown that ship to hell.

Thanks.

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