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Reviewer: SORAL179 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2012 12:02 PM Title: Last Request

Please please this scene in the new movie

Reviewer: SORAL179 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12/20/2011 4:40 PM Title: Last Request

On e familiar weari g the mask of a stranger too true

Reviewer: Kirkinadream Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2011 1:36 AM Title: Last Request

Very well written.  Oh so sad.

Reviewer: oyboh Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2011 5:49 PM Title: Last Request

Oh very well done!

I found only a tiny error on line 10 (not counting spaces), I think you don't need the "those" after "though".

Reviewer: Kara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2011 4:44 PM Title: Last Request

That's the first songfic that impressed me. Your writing is unique. Thanks.

Reviewer: ousoonerfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2011 1:24 AM Title: Last Request

Oh my this is gutwrenching..How can Spock stand to leave him (he is leaving all of us :(

Reviewer: Greywolf the Wanderer Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2011 9:54 PM Title: Last Request

yowch!!  aw, man, I knew this one was gonna hurt, but still...

pobre Jim.

Reviewer: CMM Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2011 4:02 PM Title: Last Request

Oh, great. Now I'm crying and my boss is looking at me funny.

Very well-written.

Reviewer: vixis Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2011 9:51 AM Title: Last Request

I can't honestly say you have anything to improve, I also loved it, agree with everything Dahliaxat said, really hope you write again! My only sadness was that it was too short but then, goodbyes often are, eh?

Reviewer: Dahliaxat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2011 6:26 AM Title: Last Request

Oh I get to review this first...Wow..that was so beautiful and sad...I liked how you write how Jim is feeling add a few lines of the song..and then back to Jim. I love the poetry of your words, they are so descriptive and I found unique.

You say my name, but no longer does it sound like a prayer set free from your lips. LOVE THIS LINE....When Spock says Jim's name in private between them..(.good example is And the Children...turbolift scene)his voice is so soft and caring...like a blanket of warmth.

Your body is warm, and yet I’ve never felt so cold.
Ah...such a sad line......I can actually feel the icicles forming.

Again sad piece but so well written..thanks so much for sharing....

 

 

 

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