Date: 11/05/2011 6:15 PM Title: Aftertaste
"Are you sure you haven't been in love all along, Jim?"
"Only if he looked for it".
These Sentences were important in the story, and I was glad they were
"he felt a dampness on the floor from where his body secreted too much"
This vision of all was so delicious and stimulates ... I bit my lower lip to be Silent
"Hey, is everyone okay in there? I thought I heard a scream."
I Roared in laugh so big that stirred the people in the house.
I can not read that sentence without breaking into pieces of laugh
Date: 03/10/2011 9:04 AM Title: Aftertaste
Ah Spock has recovered, perhaps to Kirk's chagrin. It is relief that I see Spock accepting and coming to logical conclusions, even if based on erronous information. Sometimes you just want to kick him and Kirk in the head. LOL
But all's well that ends well. I love happy endings! Oh, they want to consider better sound proofing for executive quarters.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading, and I'm glad you enjoyed! Yes, Kirk needs a kick in the butt sometimes, and the shore leave planet is so convenient for that. XD