Date: 05/22/2018 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
I confess I rarely read poems but I was curious about this one. I always thought Jim approached that meld with Spock so differently from the others. You captured what I thought perfectly.
Thanks so much for taking the time to read this piece and commenting. It's so true that the mind meld is different from the others. Scotty looks like he's scared shitless. Again, thanks for the review.
Date: 05/23/2012 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
I agree, Kirk was the only one who didn't treat it like some kind of weird, freaky mind control trick, you know? Especially McCoy--do you remember his mind rape by mirror Spock? LOL He was freaking out!
I agree with one of the others who said you have excellent insight into these scenes and characters. You really do a great job of underlining the case for their relationship.
Date: 01/08/2011 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
I like it. Very observant also with Scotty and McCoy and the look they had on their faces during the meld with Spock, while Kirk is cool and calm. They looked like it was a huge mental struggle, while it looked natural for Kirk.
Thanks Kelli it means a lot when someone comments on my poems. Again thanks for taking the time.