Date: 01/03/2011 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ah so romantic.......and I loved the beginning where you slowly introduced their meetings together. Truthfully where else do they go off duty..Sure Jim would go see Bones for a drink but besides that Spock has always been his sanctuary. A game of chess, long walks talking about anything and everything...and Spock would of course have experiments running in the lab to check over but I believe he'd rather be with Jim any day....even though they are on the bridge together for a long shift what do they do after they spend more time together..if that is not love I have no idea what is.........thanks for sharing.
Again: Thank you for leaving such a nice comment!
I agree with you completely: They are so compatible, so content in the other's company, so filled with love for the other that they would share whatever time they could besides the long and demanding hours of duty. A duty they both love and a job after all that brought them together.
I'm very happy you like it!
Date: 01/03/2011 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 1
I agree; I'd love a first time story, but this one was very nice as well.
:) Thank you! Just somehing fluffy for the K/S Valentine Calendar but I hope I could transport their love. Thanx so much for the feedback!
Date: 01/02/2011 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sweet. I especially enjoyed the details of K and S beginning their "deeper" relationship. -The talks, the touches, the shared walks. So many stories rush through or omit those details which I find so delectable. How about you expand upon those points in a longer account of "first time"? I am endlessly greedy! Thanks
Ah, being greedy when it comes to K/S is a common reaction I guess. Those two men can cause severe addiction and I love it! I'm so addicted myself...
Aaanayway, I do like details too, I love them and whenever I read stories I begin to smile sillily when the details are fitting and sweet.
Thank you for your suggestion - I shall think about it. I'm a bit hesistant to write longer stories as English isn't my native language but I might give it a try some day :)