Date: 10/23/2016 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hi! I am such a fan of this fiction and I LOVE the way you protray the chemistry between Jim and Spock. I would like to translate it into Chinese and to share it with more readers so I want to know if I can get your permission to do so? All rights will be reserved to you and I will post the link of the orignal fiction.
Looking forward to your reply.
Date: 04/29/2014 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 3
Ahh ... Ahh .. Ahh..
(My tongue wiping the table)
I do not remember what I was mad about??? ... Ah, yes i do! that was a miserable reason But I forgive you because of the love scene that was full of Lots of Lots of kisses.
Date: 02/15/2014 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 1
An interesting first chapter!
One thing for you to think about, though: In "The Conscience of the King," Spock says, "My father's race was spared the dubious benefits of alcohol," so Spock should not claim that a drink would put him on the floor.
Date: 04/25/2013 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 3
What a romantic, remarkably insightful story! I really loved the way you managed to weave this together with canon, drawing on subtle aspects of the characters and amplifying them in a fun and believable way. For instance, how you wrote about Spock's constant awareness of Kirk on the bridge (true!) as something he's unable to suppress, given their history in your story; or the way Spock collapses against Kirk after his head injury (how many times did we [happily] see Nimoy appear just a little too self-indulgently helpless when Kirk moved to assist him?), unavoidably reveling in the contact. So perfect! That scene in the cave was my favorite part.
You had some great lines, too -- one that made me smile was "Spock had always been more skilled at getting information out of computers than out of people..." -- perfect!
Thanks so much for this very rewarding read! So glad I found it!
Date: 04/06/2012 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 3
I love your insecure, confused, and so young Spock. He simply comes to life with your words. I have to say, the twleve years is a long time to think that you have sexually assaulted someone (for both of our boys)- so I would have wished for an earlier understanding between them, but I do like how you had this Kirk, and this Spock learn how to trust eachother again and become friends. Thanks for sharing your talent.
Date: 02/10/2012 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 3
I loved this story! I liked a lot how you captured Jim Kirk's easy-going manner, but at the same time show how he's actually a human being that is able to have profound feelings and can be serious about this. In all this your Jim kept his boyish charms throughout the whole story and you really sticked to the character, I loved this, because sometimes in other stories Jim kind of looses this 'attribute' but you managed to keep it just fine... Thanks a lot for sharing. I also loved your series so far and really hope that you'll continue soon. Keep it up!!
Date: 03/24/2011 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 3
I really liked this story. You did a very good job. I do wonder what is going to come of their relationship tho, I mean Spock has T'Pring as his intended mate and wife. I don't think they will let that get in the way tho.