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Reviewer: roswellfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2011 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

Cute!

Reviewer: Hypatia Kosh Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/21/2010 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 1

This reads kind of like one of those vignettes in a pop psychology self-help book. Is that what you were going for?

I did like your take on Kirk's formative years and his resultant attitude towards relationships.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your feedback.  Because I wrote this for someone else’s series, I had to utilize the same style of writing.  One of my favorite things to do when I write is try to explain why Jim Kirk has certain issues.

Reviewer: putigress2012 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2010 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 1

Gorgeous. I'm glad Spock helped show Jim what a marriage is really supposed to be - sexual relations and all, lol.

Reviewer: Khielira Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2010 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

aw!! this was cute! and it prolly does bother Spock.  :D

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