Date: 12/21/2010 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
This reads kind of like one of those vignettes in a pop psychology self-help book. Is that what you were going for?
I did like your take on Kirk's formative years and his resultant attitude towards relationships.
Thank you for your feedback. Because I wrote this for someone else’s series, I had to utilize the same style of writing. One of my favorite things to do when I write is try to explain why Jim Kirk has certain issues.