Date: 07/06/2014 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 4
Phuuu! At last they got there! I can stand angsty tales only up to a certain level, after that I feel I want to hit both of them over the head with something for being so OBTUSE!!! Seriously: it was a good read, got me hooked until the very last line. And I kept believing in a positive resolution, so I managed to stay with the angsty side of it. And I was not disappointed, my reward was the very intense joining in chapter 4, very erotic and quite original too!
Thanks for the lovely feedback. I love too angst as long as there's TLC and a happy ending in the end, so I'm glad you stayed with the story till the happier resolution. :)
Date: 02/10/2013 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 4
Wonderful story.I really enjoyed reading it. Spock and Jim were very in character and I'm really happy that your Uhura was understanding not evil and even she could tell that Spock belongs to Jim.Bones was a little too hostile I think but I must admit I love the healer's character.It makes me very happy when a Vulcan gives Spock the respect and concern that he deserves.Considering everything Spock does for his people, it is only logical for many Vulcans to consider him their hero and actually want to claim him as one of their own but unfortunately that doesn't happen in many fictions and so reading about the healer's feelings made my quite happy. Long story short, everything was great.Characters, emotions, angst...and the ending!
Thank you for sharing.
I'm so thrilled you found the characterizations good as that had my biggest concern, considering this was my first time writing Kirk and Spock. The healer was a fun one to tackle. ;) Thank you for your lovely feedback! I appreciate it very much.
Date: 03/31/2012 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 4
Poor boys- so insecure in the other's affections. I think you did a remarkable job of bringing Spock and Kirk to life and in having them come to terms with the bond and the change in their relationship.
Love you characterization of all of your characters: McCoy, Uhura, Kirk and Spock in particular. Wonderfully done. Thanks for sharing your talents with us.
Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed the plot and the characterizations. I appreciate your comments very much! :)
Date: 04/10/2011 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 4
I love when Spock tries to be all self-sacrificing but it ends up he's just sort of a blind idiot, lol. I enjoyed this.
Glad you enjoyed. It is a lot of fun to play with Spock's sensibilities when he's being like this. ;)
Date: 02/10/2011 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
Boy did I LOVE this saga! THANK YOU so much for such a supremely delicious serving of h/c. steamy sex, angst and romance. I sure hope your muses have lots more stories just waiting to be told - I'm so there!
Thank you for reading it and for letting me know you enjoyed it. H/c + Angst is my favorite thing in the world, as long as I get my happy ending. I do plan to write more K/S for sure. :)
Date: 12/13/2010 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
I beg to differ: 0.08534 * 74 does not equal a whole number.
(So Spock is an unreliable narrator from page one? Clever...)
Are you referring to the percentage of their chess games going to draw? If yes, then I don't know what's unreliable about it... Spock is simply 'thinking' about how... of the total number of games they've played, 8.534 percent have gone to a draw, and of the rest from which a result came, 60% were won by him.