Date: 06/03/2013 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sonak regarded his father, eyes traveling up and down. "Your clothing flatters your physique." LOVE IT! THAT WAS...INCREDIBLE. I KEEP GOING BACK UNTIL I READ IT LIKE FIVE TIMES BECAUSE IT WAS...JUST, AMAZING.
My favorite part was him; Sonak. A very well done character. Very cute too.
Date: 02/24/2012 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
I think this is my most favorite K/S fic to date. I love the way you captured Jim …not making him girly but making him motherly. I love that. Plus I’m a huge fan of established relationship fics. They are difficult to find though …
And you wrote my favorite line of all the K/S fics I’ve read (which is quite a few.)
“Spock took in the sight of his husband. He saw every detail. Soulful blue eyes, their child held close, and glasses askew in wayward hair. "I will accompany you home whether you agree or not," he said.”
So pretty and so definitive to the characters.
The sex scene was in a word, Hot. Lol. Not that many writers butcher them too badly but this was one of the better done ones.
I thought Sonak was great ... and honestly I don’t remember how many bad dreams I had at the age of ten. In other words this is a lovely little piece and I can’t wait to see what else you’ve written.
Date: 10/02/2011 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
I liked this fic very much.
As for the kids age affecting his emotions, remember he's been through a significant trauma along with the rest of Vulcan which is bound to make him "emotionally compromised". Actually this kid's been through several traumas: loss of home-world, personal loss of parents, months or years in Vulcan foster care equivalent (I doubt Jim and Spock adopted a kid right out of the gate in their relationship), Adapting to new "parents" and Alien environment culture shock.
I think it would be odd if he DIDN'T lose control sometimes...we all know Vulcans have emotions, they just repress, surpress and generally bury them.
Anyway I love this family and especially the way you switch POV's to show the inner workings of each character without confusing the reader ( not easy to do).
Date: 07/12/2011 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
I totally love this story. Sonak is adorable. Kirk being able to talk to Spock and Sonak in Vulcan is awesome. I always like the fics that Kirk is fluent in Vulcan. And the bit of information about Kirk being warmer than them, so made him a source of comfortable is sweet and the feeling of family shows through. :) I hope you write more into this...maybe a sequel? :) Hope to read more.
Date: 07/10/2011 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh I just adored this! Thank you for sharing this lovely fluffy story. It was just what I needed. :)
Date: 07/04/2011 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
I adored this~ I felt kinda bad for Spock when there was a jealousy thing with Kirk and their kid but the whole colored waffle thing was wicked funny! I find myself kind of hoping that you would make their domestic relationship and their adopted son a universe :) Great job!~
Date: 12/18/2010 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
This should not be called "over-indulgen fluff", it's more like "required to live fluff". I love this story, and I've read it too many times to count. I love thinking of Jim and Spock as parents, they strike me as perfect parents material. Your choice in son was also really good; Sonak was just too cute. I'm also a big fan of the shameless sex at the end. ^.^
Date: 11/30/2010 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
I loved this story a lot. Jim and Spock make such great parents in your fic. And Sonak is just too adorable.
"Your clothing flatters your physique." Indeed. I laughed so hard I scared my roommate. Also, Jim getting scared by a research paper on Halloween is fairly amusing. Thoug I felt with him, a paper researched by a Vulcan, even a tiny one, would probably make me scared too.
I wouldn't mind reading more in this verse. *gives you a gentle nudge*
Sonak is just too awesome for one single story.