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Reviewer: Celes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2012 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is one of my favorites. Its so funny and clever. When you read it the first Time you will be suprised at some point;) Not your ordinary cave storie.



Author's Response:

I think I sent this story to you a long time ago...when I used to write constantly. But, I made it TOS instead of reboot..I think it works better for reboot...So glad you like it.

Reviewer: Live Long and Prosper Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2012 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 1

And there I was thinking Vulcans couldn't lie. Apparently, the horny ones can lol.

Strangely enough, I can actually imagine both Spock doing this and I agree that Pine!Kirk would likely overreact; it would just be so funny that in life-threatening missions he is fearless and then a little thing like a bite could turn him into a total wimp.

I really liked Bones' attitude towards the situation aswell, how he didn't seem all that surprised and seemed to enjoy knowing about it before Jim.

Great story, just like all your others :)

Author's Response:

Thanks so much. I really appreciate seeing someone new comment. I had written this story for the TOS universe, but  I just couldn't see Shatner screaming like a little girl seeing a snake...Nu Jim...I believe he would. Thanks again for the kind review.

Reviewer: Fugitive Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2012 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

Lol naughty Vulcan! and I love the pic.

Reviewer: VCVZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2012 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 1

XD can't breathe!
Now that's a scene in the next movie I need to see!

Reviewer: roswellfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/16/2011 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 1

Spock and Bones in cahoots (even only peripherally) will never not be funny! Thanks for sharing this.

Reviewer: Greywolf the Wanderer Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2010 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hee hee hee, this was fun!!

Reviewer: Cutting love Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2010 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hehehe nice one! I was sorta hoping the whole time that it wasn't really poisonous... ^_^



Author's Response:

Thanks Cutting love ...gee this little funny story is making people giggle...and I am very glad you liked it...I know we don't always have Spock to be the chaser but this time well I guess I threw logic out of the window...



Author's Response:

Thanks Cutting love ...gee this little funny story is making people giggle...and I am very glad you liked it...I know we don't always have Spock to be the chaser but this time well I guess I threw logic out of the window...

Reviewer: Simone Allen Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2010 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is a really fun idea and, I think, the best-written one you've posted so far. It made me smile :D

xx

 



Author's Response:

You made my day saying that...especially coming from you...thanks so much...dear friend..

Reviewer: atymer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2010 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 1

This wass cute. I can't imagine Bones and Spock in cahoots. That's hilarious.

Oh, and Jim screams like a girl. LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL



Author's Response:

Thank you Atymer for commenting...I wrote this a year ago.  I write slash poetry, I do try to write fic the best I can... and when I did write it, it didn't go well with the original crew...I seriously don't see Bill Shatner screaming like a little girl...but Pine..yep...so just a cute silly story with a perfect title...so many more i must update..thanks for reading ..means a lot...

Reviewer: MyriadProBold Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2010 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

Heheheheee.

Thats a funny one.

Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed this funny little story.  Now I need to pay attention to my other work that needs updating ....thanks for your comment..means so much...merci..

Reviewer: Bastet Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2010 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 1

I wouldn't be surprised if that had been a trained snake too...trained to bite in just the right spot...lol



Author's Response:

Thanks dear Kelli for commenting ...it means so much..

Reviewer: verizonhorizon Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2010 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

LOL LOL LOL! Sneaky Vulcan! That was hilarious.



Author's Response:

Oh my god............Verizonhorizon...what an honor that you read it...It means so much...merci...

Reviewer: Spockaholic Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2010 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 1

Leave it to Spock to pull a stunt like that ;)  There is a lot of win in this story.  Not only was it freakin' hilarious, there were some very interesting conversations sprinkled throughout.  I loved the conversation Jim and Spock had about the destruction of Vulcan and Spock's relationship with Uhura, and I also really enjoyed Spock's interactions with Bones.  I loved how the good doctpr took it all in stride, lol. 



Author's Response:

I have you dear friend for saving my work from a year ago. I wrote this for the original guys and dusted it off and realized the Shat...does not scream like a little girl...even though it would be awesome if he did...Pine on the other hand...I think he would. So anyways changed a few things...I always love a good title and Love Bites is so appropriate.  Thanks so much my friend...

Reviewer: logicallyillogical Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2010 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

LOL. Spock you naughty little Vulcan. Thanks Denise for the laugh, I needed it today!

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