Date: 10/23/2010 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
I guess we're married, then," he murmured. "Doesn't seem like the turning point everyone makes it out to be."
Truer words and all that. Also, I like how I kind of wondered if it was a pon farr story, even if that wouldn't quite make sense, and then it turned out it wasn't.
FYI, there was a TOS K/S story about five years ago where Spock has to have an organ akin to a pancreas removed after he accidentally eats a meat hot dog thinking it was a soy dog and the proteins tear his insides up. Well, I think it was K/S but I seem to recall Chris Pike was captain. Er, well, whatever, it was an interesting story anyway.
Date: 10/23/2010 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
"Spock formed like a lightning strike." What a great image. I had to go to the trouble to log in to comment on that. I was picturing some tv magic, a sudden blur that resolves into a feverish Vulcan.
Btw, I think it's cool that you're going with lower core temp Vulcans. It makes more sense to me, too. I've yet to buck convention myself but I welcome the change.