Date: 04/29/2014 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
Thank you for this wonderful story. The last part was especially insightful. I've always felt the same as Spock, being a child of two/three cultures myself. Always foreign, neither one nor the other and no mothertongue.
The "quotes" are truly wise and were a pleasure to read. They gave the sense of a global issue, of a larger world beyond this story. A sense of scale and then a sense of focus in Jim's own story. Kind artsy and cinematic maybe.