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Reviewer: Pamdizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2012 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 1

LOL, just looked at this again...is it me, or does it look like he really, really wants to touch himself?



Author's Response:

Really? Off to check the image as well. So desperate the poor soul. Maybe he is thinking of Spock while touching himself. Hmmm, not there is a thought. 

Reviewer: VCVZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2012 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 1

He's acting like a lovesick teen!
The worst case I've ever seen!
I perscribe the truth, with a dash of being brave
And lots and lots of smex they both crave!

Reviewer: Tydomin Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2012 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is brill! :D

Reviewer: logicallyillogical Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2010 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 1

The thing I like the most about this poem is the inner doubt that you capture...deep down inside, Roddenberry wanted Kirk to struggle with the decisions that he is forced to make. The crew never sees the inner doubts of their captain -- to them, he is all-capable and forever confident. But Jim is just like everybody else, wondering what course of action to take...

"Should I? Shouldn't I?" I can definitely see him lying awake many a-night pondering this question.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much Jen..it means alot that you took the time to comment.  Makes me happy.  Love you lots dear friend.

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