Reviews For Slave Bond
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Reviewer: Hakka Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2010 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

The story is really original and I'm looking forward the next chapters.

However, I feel I have to suggest you to improve your writing style: it seems you develope the plot with a quick pace. Take the time to develop more slowly the scenes and the inner thoughts too.

And a more fluid html style would be better for the eye too. :)

Don't take it as offence: I see potential here and, since the story deserves soo much, I'd like it to be perfect. :)

Can't wait to see how this bond will influence both Spock and Kirk lives, especially if they will become First Officer and Captain as predicted. I cannot imagine how the bond will be happy if Kirk will be the superior of his Master. XD

Love. <3

Reviewer: Tonati Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2010 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 1

yum! kinky!

Thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: Dahliaxat Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 09/26/2010 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is well done...it is always nice to reading something a little different...looking forward to your next chapter...

Reviewer: MyriadProBold Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/26/2010 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 1

Nice. I haven't seen anything quite like this before.

Reviewer: fallenangel Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/26/2010 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 1

this is so awsome, more please

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