[Report This]Date: 10/10/2010 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
The story is really original and I'm looking forward the next chapters.
However, I feel I have to suggest you to improve your writing style: it seems you develope the plot with a quick pace. Take the time to develop more slowly the scenes and the inner thoughts too.
And a more fluid html style would be better for the eye too. :)
Don't take it as offence: I see potential here and, since the story deserves soo much, I'd like it to be perfect. :)
Can't wait to see how this bond will influence both Spock and Kirk lives, especially if they will become First Officer and Captain as predicted. I cannot imagine how the bond will be happy if Kirk will be the superior of his Master. XD
Love. <3
[Report This]Date: 09/28/2010 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 1
yum! kinky!
Thanks for sharing!
[Report This]Date: 09/26/2010 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is well done...it is always nice to reading something a little different...looking forward to your next chapter...
Date: 09/26/2010 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nice. I haven't seen anything quite like this before.
Date: 09/26/2010 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
this is so awsome, more please