Date: 06/18/2011 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
love it! and i like your mcc, he came out very well-flavored. kudos to you for being in-character with the trio while including sexy-sexy times.
he, i can just imagine mccoys face when discussing the medical applications of this particular cure... :P
Rofl, I can just imagine it too. Thank you!
Date: 12/03/2010 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is a refreshingly well-written story. I love the style you use and I especially love the "Vulcans don't..." and "Vulcans aren't..." lines throughout. Very cleverly placed and funny! Also, serious kudos for SUCCESSFULLY writing from Spock's POV.
I look forward to checking out more of what you've written!
I'm glad those lines added to the humor, because I imagine that if Vulcans DO have a sense of humor, it would have to be a subtle and dry sort, much like Spock demonstrated with all those "don't's"... :) And thank you kindly, I'm glad Spock's character rang true for you!
Date: 10/06/2010 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
“Spock! We’re not telling McCoy!”
“A pity, as I’m certain the look on the good doctor’s face would have been worth preserving for posterity.”
Muahahaha! It so totally would have :-D But his face when he learns about the relationship will probably be nearly as good :). I doubt Uhura will be surprised though; she seemed to have picked up the vibe between them.
This was a really good story, with a nice contrast between the colorful morning at the beginning (Spock should have known to expect the unexpected from Jim Kirk ;) and the mostly quiet, sedate evening together in the latter part. I love how mature and adult Jim sounded in that part. For instance, the way he simply smiled warmly and said "no" when Spock offered to massage his neck. Too often we'd see him get flustered and nervous like a teenager at that point, but your Jim just stayed calm and at peace, in a way. I enjoyed that. :)
Plus, it provided another great contrast with the raging passion that overtook them once Jim and Spock established that the attraction between them was mutual - and boy, was that hot! And the idea of Jim with glasses is irresistible. Sexy intellectual jock? It SO works for me! Oh, and I loved the bit with the lyre too. Spock was playing and stroking and soothing his captain's emotions the same way he did his instrument. Nice word play in the title too, regarding both the eyesight issue and the shift in perception of both men about the other that occurs during the course of the story :). Great story, and thanks very much for sharing!
Omg, I know, the sexy intellectual jock was what first turned me onto writing this story... mmmm, does it get much better than that? I THINK NOT! And the title was a fun little play, as you pointed out.. :) My little inside dig! Thank you very much for commenting, I'm so sorry it took me basically a YEAR to get back to you, I'm terrible about things like this... in any case, I'm glad you enjoyed the story and that so many little pieces of it were interesting to you! Thanks again!
Date: 09/16/2010 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wonderful, just perfect. Loved your story immensely. You did a great job and such wonderful dialogue between them both it flowed so well. Loved McCoy also...thanks for sharing. Oh and it was hot.......yum
Haha, I'm glad all the characters rang true for you.. thank you kindly! And also glad to hear the hawt appealed.. :)