Date: 07/21/2010 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
I wish the story had been developed more, with at least some details explaining what happened to Jim exactly and how, but it was a cute fic and the scenes with Spock were nice. My three biggest awwwws: Jim comforting Spock about the loss of Vulcan and his mother, Jim sitting in Spock's lap on the bridge, and Spock leaving sickbay so Jim could tell McCoy he does consider the dctor a friend. I also liked a lot to see Spock carrying the fully-grown-again Jim to his own room, Jim nuzzling him, and Spock giving in to the desire of kissing Jim's forehead again :). This was a nice way to start the day. Thanks!
Author's Response: I agree that ideally, the story should have been developed more, but usually when I fill a prompt at the kink meme I tend to just write a shorter story which focuses on exactly what the prompter asked for. I'm glad you enjoyed it nonetheless. :)