Date: 01/05/2011 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 12
For the love of God update please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I fuckin love this chapter it made my day and cmon it's my crack!!!!!!!! I wanna see a love scene with Kirk and Spock plAying chess and then kissin or maybe the first time Spock calls Kirk T'hy'la and smex or something but omg woman update!!!!! You will make my year!!!!! Yay 2011 closer to 2012 and the new Star Trek!!!!!!!!
Date: 10/16/2010 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 12
Damnnnnnnnnnnnnn...You had to end it there...oh you are so wicked......I LOVE YOU STORY...YOU WRITE SO WELL ...and I can see this version so well..in my mind it's freaky....the dialogue between Jim and Ambassador Spock. I wonder what he will say when he sees behind the door..The hmmmmm intimate door...come on....you are gonna make us wait aren't you...Please not too long..ahhhhhh Jim is gonna find this weird seeing himself and ..... doing .... oh well can't wait..YOU ARE SO MADE OF WIN.............
Date: 10/08/2010 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 11
What a roller coaster ride Kerchan............fricken brilliant ...I don't know what else to say it was just perfect....I love the scene with McCoy and Spock crying and holding each other...ok so Spock doesn't show any tears but he understands...so he was the subsititute for Uhura which is wonderful I think..Can't wait for the next chapter....you never cease to amaze me...thanks for sharing...
Date: 10/05/2010 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 10
Excellent chapter ....words cannot describe the ride you gave me with this chapter. Damn you are good....I honestly don't know what Bones will do for his friend. Will Jim just accept the truth.....he knows what Bones is saying is true. But he is confused. His anger for his supposed father is beyond reason, but now what of Ayel his supposed uncle...he lied to him also. Poor Jim...looking forward to the next chapter ...thanks for sharing your wonderfu story Kerchan...
Date: 10/05/2010 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 10
OMG THE MOMENT OF TRUTH! :O
I like your take of the drill fight - I'm sad to see Hanaj sacrifice himself, though I'm very glad that Jim and Sulu saved each other. The bit with Amanda always makes me sad, and go Sulu and Bones for being so observant! Bones is such a wonderful friend ... This story just gets better and better with each chapter and I can't wait to read the next part to see the fallout from the revelations! And OMG what's gonna happen with Ayel? I still want Jim and Ayel to reunite!
Date: 09/30/2010 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 1
Dear KERCHAN ....i already reviewed just checked out all the stuff you do...the art and the vids...i think i saw forever young 3 times...just wondering if you belong to a slash group..there is kirk/spock facebook but i have one too. It is called The Slash Connection...and would love it if you would come and visit...Illogicallylogical, Mirrorgirl, and Bastet have joined...would be great to see your art on our group...Medicated Maniac is a dear friend of mine from New Zealand...let me know ...you are so made of win...and go ahead ...BLUSHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH....TAKE CARE....
*blush* I'm so predictable! XD lol! I will consider it. I'm not apart of any Kirk/Spock groups at the moment (just the Spirk group on Deviantart). I will take a look and consider joining. I am very happy that you enjoy my work. Thank you so much for the kind comments. They really spur me on to do my best!
Date: 09/29/2010 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 9
Let me put it this way: I find myself enjoying this AU as much as (if not more!) than the actual movie! I love all the conspiracies and schemes that are happening, and you write the characters so very well. I love the deep friendship between Jim and Bones, and Jim's conflict is so understandable. I love how protective Spock is of Jim, and the scene of Bones in the sickbay was so sad. I really hope Ayel and Jim can reunite ... and I can't wait to see what happens next!
Thank you so much for the comment! *blush* I am so happy that you are enjoying it. I tried to keep the same dynamic you see in the movie and representing the characters can be a little tough. Your encouragement means a lot to me! I do hope the rest of the story keeps you on the edge of your seat as the updates come. Thanks again!
Date: 09/21/2010 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 6
You are doing a wonderful job Kerchan...so many things happening...and now things are changing between Spock and Kobayashi Alternative. Two years is a long time...could time have made them far less hostile towards each other making them want to be closer as equals...Pike scared the shit out of me..he is scary and an ass when he wants to be...anyways sounds wonderful can't wait to see if Spock will turn Jim over...or even Bones for that matter...will he follow Jim when he says now is the time.....come with me...update soon...you rock
I am so happy that you are enjoying the story! I do love Jim and Bones friendship dynamic and I wanted him to play a bigger role in this story than what was given him in the movie. I was thinking from a stand alone point of view that Jim and Bones could end up very close since Jim and Spock haven't found their dynamic yet. Thank you so much for your comment!
Date: 09/15/2010 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 4
What a wonderful chapter! Bones is such a great friend, and Jim is such a rebel! Your Spock and Pike are awesome, and I love the programming duel between Jim and Spock! Can't wait to see what happens next! :D
Thank you so much! It was a lot of fun to write their programming duel! XD