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Reviewer: Saphira Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2013 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 13

This is awesome! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Daybora Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2013 1:30 PM Title: Prologue

Yay, totally forgot this story existed, it's been so long since an update.  I love your smart, competent Kirk.  And I'm excited that you haven't forgotten The Edge as well.

Reviewer: spockirk Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2013 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 8

I'm enjoying this story up to this point:

"...the damages are irreparable-" "If they are irreparable, Ambassador, I cannot claim to understand the validity of 'reparations'..."

?

I'm just as confused as the Romulan commander. If they had nothing to do with Nero - and the Federation has acknowledged that - why ask for reparations from the Romulans in this timeline?

 

This certainly doesn't put the Federation in a good light. Is that the point here?

 

 

Reviewer: SORAL179 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2012 7:13 AM Title: Prologue

Where is theresist of this thoroughly entertaining read?

Reviewer: Mediwitch3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2011 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 4

I loved the part at the beginning where Jim was like "and no more asking the other of us when the first one says no, because while it may turn out on your end, it puts me in the dog house." I immediately thought of how people always do that to parents. Also, the dream in the beginning that creepy and didn't make much sense. Why was it there?

Reviewer: Mediwitch3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2011 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 4

I loved the part at the beginning where Jim was like "and no more asking the other of us when the first one says no, because while it may turn out on your end, it puts me in the dog house." I immediately thought of how people always do that to parents. Also, the dream in the beginning that creepy and didn't make much sense. Why was it there?

Reviewer: willowtree_16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2010 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 10

keep up the good work

Reviewer: Carapheonix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/03/2010 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 9

Please update soon!

Reviewer: Hypatia Kosh Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2010 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 8

Nice chapter. I like the crossover between old Trek and new. So apparently the Romulan commander's interest in Spock was genuine? Or she still genuinely thinks she can turn him into a Romulan double agent? Hmm...

Reviewer: Hypatia Kosh Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/2010 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 5

Okay, maybe I overreacted... Spock just called her Doctor. *blood pressure lowering...*

Srsly, I know lots of married men who cook, my father included.

Reviewer: Hypatia Kosh Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/2010 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 5

Okay, maybe I overreacted... Spock just called her Doctor. *blood pressure lowering...*

Srsly, I know lots of married men who cook, my father included.



Author's Response: Lol, mine included too. As well as my mother, still. ;)

Reviewer: Hypatia Kosh Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/2010 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 5

His wife and her cooking? What is this, the stone age? BTW, were you aware that in TAS, where April was introduced, his wife was his CMO?

Excuse my while I go gag. Mom's Wifey's Meatloaf. Just what the doctor ordered.

Reviewer: Hypatia Kosh Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/2010 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 2

"When war is potentially imminent, Captain, I am uncertain we have the luxury of considering the decision 'quick'. I was told that it would not matter how long they waited. The wound of losing Vulcan would still be as deeply felt."

Kirk nodded slowly. "Whoever told you that was a smart person," he murmured, staring off into space.

 

OMG, topical. This keeps calling to mind 9/11 and the fact that a majority of people still have a freakout about Ground Zero. Truer words and all that.

Reviewer: lucybun Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/06/2010 5:04 PM Title: Prologue

I am really impressed with this story.  I read all of the available chapters today, and I am intrigued. Your plot so far is believable and interesting. I can't see where this story is going, but I mean that in a good way.  I can see any number of directions that you could validly go. Any story that has me thinking about what's going to happen next a good while after I've finished reading it is a major winner in my book.  Love the development of Uhura.  She's a very real person in this story, not just a BAMF or a plot device keeping Spock and Kirk apart.  Slipping the candy to Kirk was a small thing that made me see a bit of the sweetness of the TOS Uhura, and suddenly made your Uhura very real to me.  I love it when authors can do that! I actually appreciate all of the characterizations so far.  Spock and Kirk are true to character, but also believably changed/matured as they should be a year into the mission.  Also, do I see a McCoy/SpockPrime subplot brewing? I can't really tell yet, but personally I hope so.;-)  Keep the chapters coming!

Reviewer: xam Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2010 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 3

Very interesting so far. :D

Reviewer: DreamTime Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2010 10:09 PM Title: Prologue

Like the way this story starts, and the humanity of the characters (esp. Uhura and her interaction with the crew).  Read The Edge, and really enjoyed it (hope it will be finished one day :-) ), and this new tale promises to be as good.  Keep writing :-)


Carolin



Author's Response: It will be, I promise, lol. I know my ending, I just have to write it.

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