Date: 05/08/2010 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh this is lovely! I particularly enjoyed Spock's reticence. I think a lot of pressure is put on tops to embody that role entirely, and acknowledging the uneasiness that can accompany it is really difficult.
Thanks for your remarks. My greatest concern was to faithfully show the complexity of emotions from the top's side, especially from the perspective of a novice top.