Date: 08/08/2013 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
Unexpected and disturbing. An impressive piece, thank you.
[Report This]Date: 01/18/2012 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 1
Never managed to work out the multi partner ideal though fairly sure that works best consenting. On the other hand could read this as the ultimate in your face response for an adulterous partner whose actions are unacceptable a sort of what if ensuring the unwanted element feels what it is like. It sort of takes those Spock disappointed in Jim looks to the extreme. Disturbing but if you have been in Spock's position has a ring of truth.
[Report This]Date: 12/05/2011 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
I've wondered for a while if it's possible to make the K/S-relationship look at least mildly disturbing, in a believable manner, from an outsider's point of view. I think this story succeeds in that aspect, and I mean that in the best possible way. Great choice of perspective, and well-written OC also.
[Report This]Date: 05/08/2010 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
This one is really... strange and yet fascinating: I have yet to read a Jim as this one: I found him somehow disturbing and yet I loved every bit of the fic. Plus: the point of view, a genius's choice!
[Report This]Date: 05/07/2010 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow. What a fascinating and even slightly uncomfortable look at our favorite characters from the perspective of a stranger Very unique and so well written. Loved it.
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Thank you so much for reading, and responding.