Date: 05/21/2010 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is very well done. And like Greywolf said, hot as Hell.
I really love how you did the dynamic between them. I like BottomSpock stories first of all, but I don't want Spock to be anyone other than himself. This story really had the love and the trust and the strength flowing between them in a way that was totally believable for me. Your characterization of Jim was great, too. He was strong for Spock, in control because Spock needed him to be, but ready and willing to give it up when the situation called for it. And the end, how even after Spock flips Jim over and has been fucking his brains out he can't come without Jim's permisssion. And the sound of Jim's heart...that really got me. Thank you for sharing this with us.