Date: 12/10/2011 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
(Breathing and releases, in relief)
"good for you"
I must admit it was not easy for me the first half of your story, but from knowing Jim's love for Spock, it's changed. Of course more burdened on the heart but it's not something that I could not bear.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. It is appreciated :)
Date: 06/06/2010 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
I really liked this story a lot. I felt so sorry for Spock when he was confronted with the situation in which he's the only one who could do anything about interacting with a telepathic race and yet his own upbringing prevented him from being able to be as effective as he undoubtedly would have wanted to be. Although it led to him and Jim hooking up so I can't be too upset about it, can I? lol
Date: 04/12/2010 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
Okay, now time for the real review. I was so happy to read this. First of all, I love longer stories like this. And while I first thought it was a kinky Aliens Made Me Do It type of story, It quickly turned into something that blew my tiny excuse for a mind. It had eveything that I consider needed for an awesome fic
- Angst (mild but still sweet once resolved)
In conclusion, You are awesome. Thank you so much for writing this!!
Date: 04/12/2010 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh my god.
“Yeah you know, little Spock and the lieutenants.”
Okay I haven't even finished reading yet, but that made me laugh out loud, which really amused everyone on the train with me. Just thought I'd share. :D
excellent!! I'm glad if this brightened your journey a little (even if people did think you were a nutter!) :D
Date: 03/09/2010 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
How do you do it? Does it take a long time to write like that? I am truly amazed what words can do, they can elicit such emotion in a person. You have done that to me. You make me want to better myself and that is a goal worth reaching for. Your Jim and Spock are so perfect that truly gender is not an issue. How wonderful love could be if it were so simple. Merci beaucoup mon amie.