Date: 03/10/2010 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well done...I have tears in my eyes! You did a fantastic job of capturing the essence of Jim's emotions, and the ending is absolutely heartbreaking. I think I need to go eat some chocolate and watch "The Search for Spock" now. Keep writing!
Aww, I'm sorry! I didn't want to make anyone cry. :( Glad you liked it, though.