Date: 08/24/2013 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
This was beautiful! Your Jim and Spock are drawn so well, and Jim's POV is perfect. All the lovely little moments you included, the way you gave each of them past moments to reflect on... all wonderful. Sometimes a little phrase stood out as perfect 'hotter than summer pavement' for example. But I know that I will remember the image of Spock setting snowman stick-hands together forever. Thank you so very much for crafting such a lovely story and sharing it.
Date: 08/22/2013 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
This one is so wonderful! And so believable! Usually reading fics I sometimes must put up with the fact the Spock and Jim do not behave themselves and I take it as a tax for having all those stories to read but this one is a way different. It's like, you know, like you've had real Spock and Kirk in a real place in Canada and just observed them and noted i down. The more perfect it is that it is all created just in your fantasy.
Date: 04/28/2012 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
OMG, I don't think that I've ever read a more beautiful story than this one. The whole time I was just awwwwww-ing and now that I've finished this (waaaaaaay too short) story just a molten puddle of goo is left of me =)