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Reviewer: omega111 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/25/2009 7:51 AM Title: You'll Get There in the End (It Just Takes a While)

Wow!! This is such a fantastic story, so very different from the rest. I love it.



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!  I"m very glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Greywolf the Wanderer Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11/25/2009 6:50 AM Title: You'll Get There in the End (It Just Takes a While)

ahh, this was *very* nicely done!  The slow build of tension, the contrast between the present and the past, both the two timelines, and their own past/present conflicts.  I like very much your version of Jim -- he is so different from my Jim, and yet so very much the same.  Fucking brilliant.  I enjoyed the hell outta this, especially that it's all done!!  Yeah, folks, I love all the WIP's -- but every now an' then it's nice ta sit down and read a whole story at once.

I needed dat.  Fangs a lot.

Greywolf, slowly getting his own handle on the new guys...



Author's Response:

Thank you very much, and I apologize for the late reply.  I'd thought I"d responded to everything and then checked in here and realized, no, not so much.  I'm very glad you enjoyed it!

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