Date: 11/25/2009 6:50 AM Title: You'll Get There in the End (It Just Takes a While)
ahh, this was *very* nicely done! The slow build of tension, the contrast between the present and the past, both the two timelines, and their own past/present conflicts. I like very much your version of Jim -- he is so different from my Jim, and yet so very much the same. Fucking brilliant. I enjoyed the hell outta this, especially that it's all done!! Yeah, folks, I love all the WIP's -- but every now an' then it's nice ta sit down and read a whole story at once.
I needed dat. Fangs a lot.
Greywolf, slowly getting his own handle on the new guys...
Thank you very much, and I apologize for the late reply. I'd thought I"d responded to everything and then checked in here and realized, no, not so much. I'm very glad you enjoyed it!