Date: 11/23/2009 9:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow...how absolutely poetic. You nailed it you know. Now i need to have Spock's point of vue. Excellent job. So rich of emotion that i cannot find the words
Hello there Dahliaxat !
Wow, what a lovley review, thanks very, very much I really appreciate it! I would eventually like to get around to doing a Spock pov someday...seems only fair to Jim! :) I'm thrillled you liked it so much!
Date: 11/21/2009 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful imagery, sensual and loving, I liked it alot my favourite line was
'In his eyes, I am lost but in his heart I am found' That is just beautiful in it's simplicity.
Hi ya katie! Thanks alot for the positive feedback...you said some really nice things. I'm happy you liked it, especially the last line.
Many thanks, ~Lai
Date: 11/21/2009 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
I loved this. Sweet, sexy and so very true, hopefully my review showed up this time.
Hi there christina v ! Thanks very much for taking the time to read & review my little story. I'm really glad you enjoyed it so much!