Date: 06/24/2012 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
I absolutely love this fic. I've read it so many times I can almost recite it by heart. Your characterizations are brilliant and the dialogue is delightful.
You've managed to make a girl!spock that is totally in character, from the way she dresses to her way of speaking. The fact that she actually stopped to ask Jim's permission to touch him is PRICELESS, as is her initial objection to the 'baby' endearment. You've added just the perfect amount of humor to compliment the story without making it campy or crackish.
To me the emotion of this fic is almost palpable. I love how careful Kirk is with Spock, actually how careful they are with each other. Though there are no "I love you's" spoken, I can see the care and love so clearly on both sides. And the actual sex - very beautifully and tastefully done.
Are you still writing fanfic? I would very much like to read some more of your work, but when I try to access your lj page (my lj name is VWalk) I get an access denied message. Is your page friend locked, and if so are you accepting new friends?
The link I tried is: http://azephirin.livejournal.com/127158.html.
Thank you very much for sharing this fic.
Oh wow, thank you so much! And I'm sorry this answer is so delayed—the archive doesn't send me notifications, and I often forget to check for new reviews (obviously). Most of my LJ is locked down, but all my fic is available on Dreamwidth (http://azephirin.dreamwidth.org) and on the AO3 (http://archiveofourown.org/users/azephirin/works). I'm so pleased that you enjoyed this story—thank you again!
Date: 07/18/2011 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
(a cry of horror) what the hell?!?!
I'm so sorry!
But I can not get it!
I had Spock dressed like a woman, pregnant Spock, with an internal organ, I even had Jim with tits & vagina and also Jim's body became to the body of a woman
(Believe me, I know it sounds similar but the difference is huge!)
I got it all: I'm not a conservative!
But make Spock into a female??
This is the red line for me!
But ... and this I must say positively
I have never encountered
Such delicate, so much detail to the most unimportant details
Their touch with each other,
Downloading each other's clothes
It was seductive and erotic in levels that not seen me
I felt almost like I'm in the room with them
For that I praise you
Date: 01/09/2010 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
Absolutely gorgeous fic. There should be more of these sort of fic - SERIOUSLY. I like the fact that they are pretty much in character and this is a perfect female spock version. tnx for sharing this wonderful fic with us. ^-^
Date: 10/31/2009 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it! :D Very sweetly written, and the two of them fit together so well. Jim is just adorable (what? he is!), and Spock, oh Spock, with the quadruple-negative thing, that hint of shyness mixed with the calm openess....like I said, really loved it. :)