Date: 10/25/2009 6:00 AM Title: Last Guys don't finish nice...
very good and a tad scary :) always thought Spock COULD rule the universe. But you dont EXPLAIN...!! Thats just mean ;). More!!
I don't think he wants to rule the whole universe. Just some of it. And I hate explaining things up front. I prefer to start in the middle of everything and have people play catch-up. Mean? Yes. But I've never claimed to be nice. Glad you like it.
Date: 10/24/2009 8:23 PM Title: Last Guys don't finish nice...
Ah brilliant. I love your take on immoral Spock and can't wait to see how this universe unfolds!With those three in charge it should be very interesting.
That's what I thought. This was inspired from a comment someone made in my livejournal, and it ate away at me until I just had to write it.
Date: 10/24/2009 7:31 PM Title: Last Guys don't finish nice...
Captivating! Enthralling! Exceedingly well-written, bonus points for sophisticated vocabulary. (Apse. Really? *.:sighs:.*) A gathering of the fibers from canon, a deft spinning of something clearly new and unexpected. And all with one scant chapter.
I am waiting, utterly, with bated breath, for more. Oh where are we headed, captain my captain?
You will continue, won't you?
Thanks for the review! I'm glad you are enjoying it. It will be continued, but I need to update my Kirk/McCoy/Pike epic first.
The vocabulary? Product of an eidetic memory and a voracious reading appetite.