Date: 03/05/2013 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, the vids one of my favs as well as the song. The story captured it all perfectly. Wow. I can see crazy Kirk prodding and stabbing at Spock to set him off. It just may get him killed one day at the rate he is going.
To Spock's disgust, the Captain would die happy. LOL
Date: 01/16/2011 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
>Ahhh? >(Fingers nervously playing great)
>Have not heard of "make love not war "?...
>I can not see all that blood was flowing - I just washed the floor!
>And I would prefer you to sweat rather than bleeding.
>Is not it better to channel all that aggression into something more passionate?
>Hello! >Hello! >What is this? >Reconstruction mortal Kombat game?
>Not on the walls - the original designer of capital paid series of the eighties!
>Do not throw unless you plan well and make them attach them to your plot!
>Hey! >Somebody get in here "first aid" ... not a stretcher - Bring bed! >There is no need sheets, would not stay them nothing!
>Where to take them? >The "Chicago Hope"? >"? ER" "Grey's Anatomy"?
>Too much violence - too little "F" I'll be back for another ten minutes to see with something better when Spock returns ...
>I'll make a gallon of ice cream
Date: 06/03/2010 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
"Spock gave him a look that clearly said 'Die a painful death.'" Hilarious! And so freakin' hot! I think my favorite part was the very end, and Kirk's last thoughts. What a troublemaker! Althoug if he's going to get rewarded with Dominant!Spock then yeah, he has very little incentive to cease and desist.
Date: 02/20/2010 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
One of my most favorite stories about this verse! I just love the interactions and how they aren't lovey dovey right away but actually have aggression like in the movie. I think I'm going to be reading this at least once a month... XD
Date: 01/05/2010 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
woo first off thanks for linking hte video! and secondly. holy shit. this was HOT! im so sick and tiered of reading fluff in this fandom so this fic was a breath of fresh air. you must write more! must. xx
Date: 10/25/2009 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
One: THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR LINKING THAT VIDEO. Hot. Brilliant. Sexy as hell.
Two. THANK YOU SO MUCJ FOR WRITING THIS. Hot. Brilliant. Sexy as hell. XD
The way you describe the fight is perfect, tense and fast moving with these little bursts of impact. The transition to violent sex was also great (and completely fitting with mood of the video). I have a weakness for angry wall sex ~!
Best of all - I love the last line and can perfectly picture Spock getting the transmission and charging back in to give it to Jim all over again.