Date: 02/17/2013 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hi, there! I love your story a lot. But what happens to Kirk and Spock? Do they die on the planet, or do they survive and live epically ever after? Can you please write a sequel? Thank you for writing such an amazing story!!!
Date: 05/06/2012 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
The End? THE END?? What do you mean, The End?!? Aaagh, no, this can't be the end, I'm almost pulling my hair out here because I want to read that they're going to make it back to the ship safely. But then again, what am I talking about, of course they're going to make it. Silly me :)
Date: 06/07/2011 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
What? That's how you finish it? I do not agree! I forbid you! You sucks!
When he wrote about the history of kissing, straight remembered final scene of "The Princess Bride" there, too, spoke of the eternal kisses. You wrote it really fascinating and exciting and really believed you with all the stories I read on this site, It really was a "lesson for everyone"
Date: 11/17/2009 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 1
Normally I'm most adamant about getting my happy endings, but I find that your open ending works for me, probably because I believed in that acceptance and peace Jim found after learning about Spock's feelings and confessing his own. Also, while Spock would not normally confess anything so private so bluntly, you did a great job in a very short space to make me both believe in the depth of their friendship and their ease with each other, and the feeling of grim hopelessness weighting on them. No idea which phrases or combinations of words did it, but it works; I picture Pine and Quinto playing that scene and flows perfectly. Another great job :).
Date: 10/14/2009 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
...that's not fair. And when school will start again I'll show this to my friend and she will cry and say the same.
If it's up to me...they'll survive - but only after 10 angsty chapters (there's a sadistic creature hiding deep in my soul^^)
But the ending is great, really. It's the type of story you can't just read and then forget - you have to think about it either with tears burning in your eyes or with an empty feeling in your chest (I'm more the "empty" type, my friend's the one with tears). There are not many stories like yours, you can be very proud of that.
Date: 10/14/2009 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
Damn it...i kept scrolling down with my mouse...and it was over...no no no..you are wicked..god that was hot...you should be punished...you are just gonna have to write another story real soon..please....man that was good.
Date: 10/13/2009 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well, in that case, Scotty managed a last-minute miracle beamup and they immediately went to the Captain's quarters to celebrate being alive. Vigourously, and with much enthusiasm. The End.
Author's Response: I like that ending too.