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Reviewer: Hypatia Kosh Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2013 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 1

I am absolutely loving how you've rewritten this scene, it's much tighter than the sloppy version that was filmed, and the bit about the eye color is quite clever. I mean this: While it is entirely possible that both of us may be -- damn!

Reviewer: swangirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/15/2009 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 1

hmmmm

go on go on

Reviewer: CatTracks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/26/2009 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 1

Dear Irlanda,  This is a spectacular beginng.  Please keep writing chapters.   You are right, few have delved into the animosity/attraction, and  the same way you have.  Keep on treking!

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