Reviews For Part II: Exile
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Reviewer: WeirdLittleStories Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/04/2016 9:47 PM Title: Exile

I love this!  Watching the two Spocks trade memories, reflect on what it means to be Vulcan, and ponder their paths and their relationships is just wonderful.  (Most readers want hot sex, but what really sings to me is character development. :-D)

 

Reviewer: argona Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2012 7:27 PM Title: Exile

Jim go to him! He took the first step! GO!

Reviewer: nhrc Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2011 3:36 PM Title: Exile

I was afraid that ritual this awful pops up at some point in the story.
I hoped not so quick

Reviewer: margarks Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2010 7:28 AM Title: Exile

so perfectly angsty. Poor Spocks! Also, I did not think it was annoying or awkward at all to call them younger and elder, seemed prefectly correct and Vulcan-esque. Oh, Spocks! My heart aches.

Reviewer: Alhena_star Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2009 6:51 PM Title: Exile

Very well done! Amazing!

I loved the interaction between Spock Prime and the younger Spock... Really, It was fascinating!

Reviewer: Terri O Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2009 7:45 PM Title: Exile

But... But... it says "completed"! "COMPLETED"!!!

That... is just wrong. So completely wrong. I was so anxious to hit the "NEXT" button, and then it wasn't there.

Hmph!

:) I'll definitely be watching to see if anything follows this, be it another chapter, or a sequel. (Please, let something follow this!)

Bravo.



Author's Response:

Sorry about that!  Mostly what I meant is that this particular part of the series is finished, but the series is not.  There's more coming, I promise.

Reviewer: Syrus Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2009 1:06 AM Title: Exile

I can't wait for more, you've got a really great first bit here! XDD



Author's Response:

This is actually the *second* bit!  The piece titled Fissure is first in the series and Exile is the second.  I'm glad you're enjoying it! :)

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