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Reviewer: nhrc Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2011 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 1

(blowing thought) wow
The intimacy that existed between them in each of the time touched me.

I'm only sorry that I did not get the "dessert" at the end (wink)

 

Reviewer: tropicsnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2010 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

I had saved this story to my favourites a while ago, having really enjoyed it. However, I recently decided to re-read it, having been bored of the slash which has been recently put onto the comm. I have to say, I was (once again) completely blown away. This is an incredible fic, as it is beautiful, moving and poignant. I love the progression of their relationship, the tension and the inetivable release. Very, very well done.

Reviewer: OneTraveller Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2010 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love this. I read the bar scene to my husband, who was amused. Great ending.

Reviewer: wanderer Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2010 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow~ So intense.

Reviewer: Syrus Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2009 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

I really liked the progression of events in the fic!  It was really fun to read! XDDD

Reviewer: Alhena_star Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2009 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh, I really enjoyed this fic!

Well done!

Reviewer: littleninjakitten Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2009 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 1

This was very well-written, but some of Spock's dialogue is a little out of character.  I don't think he would use contractions or colloquialisms in his speech at all, even if he were feeling slightly emotional.

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