Date: 04/25/2011 9:37 AM Title: Never Give Up
These were not my eyes how burn out! (if you understand me..raises eyebrows and winks)
This sentence was lovely;
"You would give me this incredible gift and take it away in the same stroke? I had not thought you so cruel in love. "
Your story picked up my heartbeat
Date: 05/09/2010 11:35 PM Title: Never Give Up
Your first explicit K/S sex scene? Congratulations on reaching that very special, uh, milestone...you certainly put some WOW in the bow-chikka-wow-wow :) That being said, great story! I really enjoyed your writing style: very fluid and intelligent. Well done!
Date: 05/07/2010 3:56 AM Title: Never Give Up
First of all how could I resist reviewing with such a hilarious summary of what I should be warned against in this fic? That said I adored this fic. I could totally see lovesick!Jim suddenly becoming SexMachine!Jim upon Spock's declaration.
Date: 08/31/2009 2:12 PM Title: Never Give Up
That was perfect! Just the right amount of angst and then a happy ending to make the my inner sook happy. And well written as well. Loved it!
I'm glad I hit the balance between angst and schmoop :D Thank you for reading and taking the time to review!
Date: 08/31/2009 2:31 AM Title: Never Give Up
I read this earlier on the kink meme - so glad you've posted it here too! Really nice treatment of the theme, well done.
Ah the Kink meme.. Am I wrong to love something that's taken over my life so thouroughly? is this like Stockholm Syndrome or something? :D
I'm really glad you enjoyed it. The nice part about posting it here is I get to go back and edit all the typos and tense shifts that I find ;) This version oribably reads a bit different than the original.
Thanks so much for the review :)