Date: 05/03/2011 7:49 AM Title: 14. Energy
crazy!!! awesome!!!
Date: 09/15/2010 6:22 PM Title: 14. Energy
I did in fact enjoy reading it and I was pleased with all the science. I didn't feel as if it bogged down or detracted from the story in any way. Nicely done.
Date: 09/15/2010 3:29 PM Title: 10. Eventuality
I appreciate your story and am not bothered by the lack of updates as it is a finished piece I am reading.
Author's Response: Haha, thank you for all of your reviews. I'm glad people are still reading this a year later.
Date: 09/15/2010 3:21 PM Title: 9. Entry
I appreciate your story and am not bothered by the lack of updates as it is a finished piece I am reading.
Date: 09/15/2010 3:11 PM Title: 8. Electricity
I'm changing it up now:
I appreciate your story and am not bothered by the lack of updates as it is a finished piece I am reading.
Date: 09/15/2010 2:55 PM Title: 7. Economy
Dear T'Para,
Thank you for updating so quickly! I greatly appreciate your story, but I hate your cliff-hangers! Please update soon!
Sincerely,
Ghost Reader
Date: 09/15/2010 2:47 PM Title: 6. Epiphany
Dear T'Para,
Thank you for updating so quickly! I greatly appreciate your story, but I hate your cliff-hangers! Please update soon!
Sincerely,
Ghost Reader
Date: 09/15/2010 2:39 PM Title: 5. Equality
Dear T'Para,
Thank you for updating so quickly! I greatly appreciate your story, but I hate your cliff-hangers! Please update soon!
Sincerely,
Ghost Reader
Date: 09/15/2010 2:39 PM Title: 4. Envoy
Dear T'Para,
Thank you for updating so quickly! I greatly appreciate your story, but I hate your cliff-hangers! Please update soon!
Sincerely,
Ghost Reader
Date: 09/15/2010 2:39 PM Title: 3. Empathy
Dear T'Para,
Thank you for updating so quickly! I greatly appreciate your story, but I hate your cliff-hangers! Please update soon!
Sincerely,
Ghost Reader
Date: 09/15/2010 2:39 PM Title: 2. Elementary
Dear T'Para,
Thank you for updating so quickly! I greatly appreciate your story, but I hate your cliff-hangers! Please update soon!
Sincerely,
Ghost Reader
Date: 09/15/2010 2:39 PM Title: 1. Easy
Dear T'Para,
Thank you for updating so quickly! I greatly appreciate your story, but I hate your cliff-hangers! Please update soon!
Sincerely,
Ghost Reader
Date: 09/15/2010 2:38 PM Title: Prologue: Equilibrium
I'm going to do as you ask:
Dear T'Para,
Thank you for updating so quickly! I greatly appreciate your story, but I hate your cliff-hangers! Please update soon!
Sincerely,
Ghost Reader
Date: 05/02/2010 6:03 AM Title: 9. Entry
haha stretch...
i get it
that was a good book
Date: 05/02/2010 5:58 AM Title: 8. Electricity
that was epicness
i dont smile often but i just did





Date: 11/28/2009 3:45 PM Title: 14. Energy
I love your science, the simple yet elegent solution to the world.
So they did know what what killing their star.
fantastic story





Date: 11/28/2009 3:29 PM Title: 13. Enemy
You made a mad man!
Why would he think nothing matters? If he killed his oppsition, he can always go back to his world, for another 50 years, why did he need to distroy everything, now?
Date: 11/28/2009 2:31 PM Title: 8. Electricity
I enjoy your Spock POV, but also the Kirk and Bones interaction...
Genius plot to bring Kirk and Spock together.