Date: 07/18/2013 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like this story very much. It is a bit cracky which is fine b/c the reboot Kirk is a bit cracky, too. I like how you blended the reboot story line with the Amok Time episode. If I were to offer any criticism, it would be to have the boys talk a more and tell what they say less. Dialogue is always a good way to point out what is happening. Good job otherwise.
Date: 07/09/2012 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
"Bones on the other hand had taken one look at Jim’s face and Spock’s still sleeping form, added two and two together and come up with four, and had then promptly gone to find himself a stiff drink in the hopes of convincing himself that his math was wrong"
XD I love your writing style! Adorable story! LOVED IT <3
Date: 10/26/2011 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very cracky, but I liked it. Variety is the spice of life, you know. Especially Liked the shakespeare moment, pretty humorous. Didn't even notice tense change, something I've never done! Guess I was that into the story. Heading over to spock pov....
Date: 04/21/2011 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm sorry that I have no constructive criticism that my English is not good enough.
But how do you describe the tension between Jim and Spock, how Spock is fighting within himself. It was mesmerizing.
It's something good I want you to know
Date: 09/12/2009 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
That's pretty much the exact sentiment I got all along concerning the Kirk/Spock element. The rest of the universe can go to hell. Komack, T'Pring, all of them. They just do not matter. Not one bit.
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it and that you feel that way (K/S forever and screw anyone who gets in the way!) I hope you'll like the companion piece that I'm working on that is in Spock's POV, and thank you for reviewing.
Date: 08/20/2009 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
OMG I laughed so hard! This was funny and I thought it was very in character for new Jim.
And this line: Bones on the other hand had taken one look at Jim’s face and Spock’s still sleeping form, added two and two together and come up with four, and had then promptly gone to find himself a stiff drink in the hopes of convincing himself that his math was wrong.
I thought this was the best Bones figures out the K/S relationship line yet. Kudos!
Thank you! That was one of my favorite lines to write, cause I love Bones because he can be understanding and suffer at the same time. Glad you liked it.
Date: 08/11/2009 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
I loved this story, you built up Jim's love perfectly and the scene where Spock is trying to be noble and Jim finally realizes he cares was gorgeous.
Thank you! That was my favorite part to write, so I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 08/04/2009 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 1
as long as your inner kirk tells you to write more stories....it's ok with the tenses :)
hope to read more from you...
Thank you! I'm in the process of trying to do Spock's POV for this, so I hope that turns out ok and I'm glad you liked this.