Date: 04/12/2013 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
I enjoyed this so much that I just swallowed it whole. ;) This was a lovely take on the Marriage of convenience trope. Spock was very believably in love, and I felt that Jim legitimately fell in love as their relationship progressed. I'm glad that Sarek came around in the end. I like that Spock!Prime was able to influence Sarek.
Thanks so much!
Date: 04/16/2011 9:56 AM Title: Chapter 12
My eyes closed ... deep breaths ... all the thoughts rushing in my head buzzing like bees .. and for a long time before I start to write a comment, there is only silence and the echo of your story
This stunning story
Touched points in my soul that I was already sure went out recently.
Storms that passed me I felt other stories
Vortices are not my shirt all weekend reading.
Fears, loneliness, pain, tension, compassion, love and colored every shade possible
This is obviously the most detailed relationship built moderate grade reading - this is a big raises.
thank you for the privilege you put me to the end of your fertile imagination
It was a great honor for me
Date: 06/02/2010 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 11
This was my favourite bit:
“Psychic love bond or something,” Jim shrugged, but Spock felt the playfulness through said bond. “How’d you think we just knew things about each other? It’s this weird Vulcan thing that hey, I don’t really understand that well, but damn if I’d want to live without it anymore.”
Date: 06/02/2010 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 5
Gorgeous! I just loved all the sneaky stolen kisses they had going on there.
It seems that Kirk and Spock are both making assumptions about each other's level of interest without talking things through, but now progress may be getting made ...
Date: 06/02/2010 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 4
“We’re gonna need to leave evidence,” Jim said seriously, setting the book down. It was closing in on what had unanimously been declared (but only named by one) bedtime. Spock raised an eyebrow. “You know. Physical stuff. Bruises and hickeys and that sort of thing.”
That was fantastic, and now you've gotten me curious about the whole Vulcan lovebite thing. Seems to me I've read references to that in some other stories too.