Date: 02/10/2013 8:23 PM Title: These Fevered Dreams
Aw...I can't get enough of this young couple and it's over.You have a way with writing them and it's simply amazing.I want more!How about writing a sequel to the first shot and another one to this?See?I feel so greedy and I can't help it.You story brightened my day.Thank you so much.
Date: 07/29/2009 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh I enjoyed this so much. Young Jim is alive in this story, captured perfectly in action, mannerism, what he says, how he says it, down to the finest detail.
And the subtle implication of so many broken promises in his life is heartrending.
Date: 07/28/2009 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh lady, you're going to kill me! that was hot! rain and lewd acts in alleyways and Middle English poetry spoken in Vulcan! all so hot. And I love the eventual connection back to the canon...
Guh! I was totally using the blow-job scene from Sinchronicity as a reference... model while reading the alley scene -- it's exactly how I picture it.. except ya know, there's no rain and there' coke involved... :sheepish grin: