Date: 01/05/2016 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
I live the way this is written especially that it takes some time before you are sure who is the injured party. The simplicity of the last line encapsulates everything. No need for PWP to understand the depth of the connection.
Date: 01/02/2013 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
i LOVE this - for many reasons. not least of the fact is that it is written in the language of Jim's Heart; that secret place where words are not babbled in haste but precisely wrought because they are important. i feel you have captured the true essence of the man. Bravo!
Date: 05/17/2011 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
Such a beautiful story that is being told from Jim Kirk's perspective while he is recovering about how he would allow only Spock to take care of him while in was in his weaken condition. For me it already showed just how strong their friendship and the love for each other so strong.
Date: 06/18/2010 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
At first I was confused as to who's perspective it was as the speech pattern seemed too formal for Jim.
I realized it made sense in a "letter" to Spock as he would elevate his language as a sign of respect.
Date: 10/10/2009 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
Okay, I am seriously wiping tears away. That has got to be the most beautiful story I have read it quite a while. Warms the heart. Thank you so much! If I could, I would have given you 12 stars.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!! You don't know how much it means to me to read your comments. This remains one of my favorite stories! Sometimes they write themselves and are pure "magic." I'd like 12 stars. Thanks!! ;-)
Date: 07/24/2009 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
A truly heartfelt story. Jim and Spock dancing around the issue of their love for one another. I'm glad it was resolved so sweetly in this story.
Author's Response: There love is meant to be. The ending was inevitable, wasn't it? Thanks for the nice comments!