Powerful rendering of the unusual POV of a almost helplessly aroused Vulcan.
Short, but gorgeously written!
Beautiful language and imagery.
Nothing wrong with oldies but goodies, and this deserves a five-star rating for your handling of it.
I'd say that works, and very very well. ;-) Here's to old tropes!
Wow! Beautiful erotic imagery.
Mmm, this was *tasty*!! More, please!!
Greywolf, wiping off the drool
Excellent story. Very well written. Please write more.
(applauds loudly) Yay for old themes and new ways to do them! Well done.