Date: 07/23/2017 4:57 PM Title: For the Love of a Child
How often a fic finishes because you can't get between two elements of the tale. I love your idea, don't ...just fast forward. Actually life is full of spans of time when nothing much happens.
Once in awhile in a story, there's no other choice but tot move ahead.
Date: 07/22/2017 4:10 AM Title: For the Love of a Child
Welcome back! It's so wonderful to be back in this universe again -- I've missed it so! It looks like you jumped ahead just the right amount to leave us with the perfect cliffhanger. Just please, don't make it last too long!
Date: 06/01/2017 5:38 AM Title: An Unexpected Journey
I am reading this now, and I find it quite interesting. I wanted to bring it to your attention though that there is a story by Tishbing on FF called, "An Unwritten Path" that is eerily similar to your story especially in these first few chapters. I am wondering if the two of you were going off the same prompt? I am hoping that she wasn't deliberately copying your story but if you read her story you'll see what I mean....
Well, I don't own the characters and I don't make a dime off the stories so if someone wants to rip me off, I'll let karma handle it.
Date: 05/31/2017 11:46 PM Title: An Unexpected Journey
This was awesome on so many levels and I am very happy with the way you decided to approach the writing challenge prompt. I enjoyed this immensely, it was heartwrenching and heartwarming, I got good and bad cries,excited suspense from reading this. A thrill ride for sure. I look forward to reading it's sequel.
Date: 05/03/2017 8:37 PM Title: A Bad Trip
Sweet story. Maybe a little too sweet for my tastes. It reads a bit adolescent from both of them. Maybe it's because I don't feel they have the back story that TOS K/S does, I don't know. I do feel that you capture the Abrams univers Kirk and Spock pretty well though.
Date: 04/24/2017 9:02 PM Title: After the Fire
This is kind of striking. Is Kirk taking no responsibility for the fact that this whole shitstorm started when HE was unfaithful to Spock. So what if Spock tried to make amend and changed his mind. Spock realized after Carol Marcus that he was changing because of Kirk's infidelities and didn't like what he was changing into. It made sense as hard as it was. And if he loved Spock SO much why then did he have 14 liaisons in three year. That was beyond excessive.