Date: 09/21/2015 11:01 AM Title: Issues of the Heart
Abit shocked Spock used so many human phrases (probably to rub it in SArek's face), but I am a bit sad Sarek is portrayed as a heartless jerk. Truth be told, Sarek is on of my favorite characters (After Spock, Kirk, and Bones). After all, he loves his son just too proud to admit it or when he's made a mistake, but I can never forget the way he defended Kirk and Spock (then again he brought Spock back from the dead soo....). However, Spock being protective is just great. Loved it.
Date: 09/21/2015 2:53 AM Title: Issues of the Heart
Yeah, not really a formula since as it stands its 78 is greater than 467.83 which is less than 865. Perhaps (x ^ 4.78y / 4 Pi D) log(62.98D/2). That looks more formula like. I know you said you don't care but . . . engineering major. You got to at least have some variables in there. As for the story itself Daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaammmmn Spock, you cold.
P.S. (you probably don't care since you finished this so long ago) Found a spelling error in this chapter and the last.
Date: 09/21/2015 2:33 AM Title: Issues of the Heart
I don't know. I think Sulu could fight Spock on that. After all, is it logical to hold a human, who's brain is wired differntly to Vulcan standards? It would be similar to expect a human to be able to lift the same amount as a Vulcan when they have 3 times human strength. See! Out logiced Spock. Still, interesting beginning. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 08/07/2015 8:49 PM Title: An Unexpected Journey
I didn't realize how hard it was for me to breathe when Jim was in that comatose state until he came out of it. Loooove this story! Now, where is this sequel?
Unimagined Destiny, first two chapters are up.
Date: 08/06/2015 1:45 PM Title: Accidentally in Love
Would you ever consider doing a sequel? And if you have, where is it?! I admit I've read this story before. I love it so much. It is rare for me to find one I love so much that I read it multiple times, enjoying it as much each time as I did the first.
Date: 08/02/2015 6:30 PM Title: The Vulcan Who Fell to Earth
Woe is me (watery eyes), I was so afraid that the end will be accompanied with a cry of my pain (smiles in relief) I feel like I can breathe again. I read the whole story in one weekend. I could not download the i-phone out of my hands. You surprise me every time. This story makes me think how much I'm glad I discovered this archive. Thank you for another wonderful experience.
Date: 07/31/2015 4:08 PM Title: An Unexpected Journey
I guess Spock Prime has too much of a presence on New Vulcan to just disappear, but I'm sad that he can't live with Jim and Mimi; it would be great for Jim to have him as a father figure, after all that he's lost.
It's painful to watch young Spock behaving so badly, but I guess that was stipulated by the terms of the challenge. And given all that young Spock has had to bear in this universe, I guess it's not surprising that he's reeling and has come unmoored. You're going to fix him, right? :-)
Date: 07/31/2015 3:58 PM Title: An Unexpected Journey
Hee! Love the author's note for this chapter.
You're right, Jim; Spock Prime IS the equivalent of a Jedi master. No matter what feats you have Spock Prime perform, we'll all believe them, because we KNOW he can do anything! :-)
Oooh, what a good pseudonym for Jim! It's little touches like that, that elevate your work above most others. Well, that and all your other mad skills. :-)