Date: 06/09/2015 9:28 PM Title: Never Let Me Go
I don't think Nyota's a bad person, she just doesn't quite realize what she agreed to when she agreed to it. It seems to me that you need to be a bit more mature than she is to be able to deal AND accept a culture that is so very different than what you're used to.
I do enjoy the way that you write Spock and Jim. Their dialouge flows quite naturally, like it did in the tv show.
Hope to get an update soon.