Date: 09/17/2017 3:10 AM Title: Agony
What an amazing story. I love it so much!
Your story matches its name. I wept when reading Jim lying lifeless on the sick bed, mind drifting in the good old days; when Jim falling from the stairs and wondering why he didn’t just let himself die... But the long and meticulous comfort coming after makes it all worthwhile. Your writing has power.
Not only the deep emotion between Spock and Jim, but also other characters’ images in your story give me a wonderful reading experience. I understand why Bones did what he did in this story. He’s a competent CMO, and he is an honest and loyal friend to both Jim and Spock. Sarek is an impressive diplomatist. And Selik, Selik is so good and incredible and beyond words. Thank you so much for writing such a wonderful story.
I want to share this beautiful fiction with fans in my home, so I wonder if I can get your permission to translate this fiction into Chinese. I will credit you fully and post the translation at http://http://www.mtslash.net/ (registration-required). I will keep all your rights for this fanfiction, and keep your name and the link leading the translation.
Thank you again for your beautiful story<3
Feel free to translate if you wish and thank you
Date: 08/02/2017 5:23 AM Title: For the Love of a Child
Thank you for the update. I can't wait for the next chapter. i still have not figured out if ksarchive has an alert for when I story I like has been updated :(. So I will keep checking back. I really enjoy your stories and hope you will finish this one this year, maybe in the next few weeks :) . You are one of my fav. authors. Wonderful writer.
Date: 07/31/2017 6:22 PM Title: All in the Family
Wow, awesome part. Jim and Spock, in love but having to deal with Jim's terrible flashbacks, and the beginnings of a new relationship between Winona and Sarek. It's fascinating really, and I look forward to where you go with this.
Thanks so much, and I hope you are well. I'm very glad to see you back. *hugs*
Date: 07/31/2017 6:09 PM Title: For the Love of a Child
Wonderful part, but I'm filled with dread at the thought of this Jim Kirk on Taursus IV. :( i'm feeling bad for poor Spock, but clearly Jim needs some freedom to come to his own understanding od their situation. :( I think the time jump was very well done, and if that's what brought you back to us - it's all good.
Thanks so much!,
Date: 07/23/2017 4:57 PM Title: For the Love of a Child
How often a fic finishes because you can't get between two elements of the tale. I love your idea, don't ...just fast forward. Actually life is full of spans of time when nothing much happens.
Once in awhile in a story, there's no other choice but tot move ahead.
Date: 07/22/2017 4:10 AM Title: For the Love of a Child
Welcome back! It's so wonderful to be back in this universe again -- I've missed it so! It looks like you jumped ahead just the right amount to leave us with the perfect cliffhanger. Just please, don't make it last too long!
Date: 06/01/2017 5:38 AM Title: An Unexpected Journey
I am reading this now, and I find it quite interesting. I wanted to bring it to your attention though that there is a story by Tishbing on FF called, "An Unwritten Path" that is eerily similar to your story especially in these first few chapters. I am wondering if the two of you were going off the same prompt? I am hoping that she wasn't deliberately copying your story but if you read her story you'll see what I mean....
Well, I don't own the characters and I don't make a dime off the stories so if someone wants to rip me off, I'll let karma handle it.
Date: 05/31/2017 11:46 PM Title: An Unexpected Journey
This was awesome on so many levels and I am very happy with the way you decided to approach the writing challenge prompt. I enjoyed this immensely, it was heartwrenching and heartwarming, I got good and bad cries,excited suspense from reading this. A thrill ride for sure. I look forward to reading it's sequel.