Date: 01/29/2019 4:49 AM Title: Shadows of the Night
Okay, I'm one of those that actually admits that I read death fics, although I'm picky about them and I have to be in the mood. I read the previous reviews and others were saying they didn't expect it. Man, as soon as I realized what was going on with Jim, I totally expected it, and I loved seeing them on Vulcan with the baby sehlats and planning on visiting Amanda.
The loss of the Enterprise and killing off everyone, though? Total left field! Well done! Jim wasn't there to figure out how to meet the Organian challenge, so they all died. Yep, I can see that happening.
Date: 01/20/2019 5:26 AM Title: Never Let Me Go
I like this twist. It's not a bad thing for Spock to have some competition when it comes to Jim's attention. I hope Jim and S'Laren have at least a little bit of a romance. Spock should have to work for it for once.
I don't know what everyone else asked for, but I hope Nyota decides to back off for herself, rather than just being a bitch. I hope she realizes that being a consort, which it sounds like she'd pretty much be, is really not what she wants in life, and why she's really so unhappy that she's getting drunk on the transport. An ending scene more like Captain Von Trapp and the Baroness, where she basically releases him towards what he really wants, might be nice, with her going back to Starfleet to be who she really wants to be.
I've been bingeing much of your work the last few days. I haven't been leaving comments much (bad me), partly because I'm new to this archive and not sure of the protocol, and unlike AO3, the reviews/comments aren't necessarily easily viewed.
I just wanted to say how very much I've been enjoying your work. I love how you've imagined these two - whether they're being loving or pining or just idiots. I also love your secondary characters. I've read your comments on health issues and the loss of your mom. I'm so very sorry for your loss. Hope you're feeling better.
Date: 08/08/2018 1:21 PM Title: Agony
Ok, couple of things:
1) I discovered your account yesterday and am powering my way through all of you long fics right now. I have to say I'm delighted that you have been active on this archive as long as you have, I enjoy everything of yours I have read so far.
2) Sarek breaking Nogura's jaw gave me so much delight I want to draw it and I cannot draw well enough yet to do the scene justice.
I am so glad to have found this archive, cuz that means I can write everything you posted here and it brings me such joy. Always keep writing!
Thank you and welcome to the site.
Date: 06/05/2018 2:19 AM Title: Never Let Me Go
This looks as though it’s on permanent hiatus, which is really sad! I really like the characters in this, including Uhura, who’s the most roundedI’ve seen in most K/S stories. I love both her heartbreak and outrage at being “inadequate” simply because she can’t have children. I was hoping to see her interactions with the family, who are most kind to Jim. Was it just the radical differences in culture or was there a personality clash of mega proportions? What’s the mystery of Jim’s origins and who’s chasing him? And what happens to Spark in the next months? Despite the incompletness, thanks for giving me so much enjoyment!
Nothing is on PERMANENT hiatus.
Date: 01/03/2018 9:34 PM Title: For the Love of a Child
I love this story. It's different than a lot of KS fiction. I like that Original Spock adopts Nu Kirk as a baby. The part where Spock is teaching Jim to crawl was adorable. Every month or 2 I check to see if it's been updated. I was really happy back in July with the update. I am worried about Tarsus, but excited to get on with the story.