Date: 05/03/2017 8:37 PM Title: A Bad Trip
Sweet story. Maybe a little too sweet for my tastes. It reads a bit adolescent from both of them. Maybe it's because I don't feel they have the back story that TOS K/S does, I don't know. I do feel that you capture the Abrams univers Kirk and Spock pretty well though.
Date: 04/24/2017 9:02 PM Title: After the Fire
This is kind of striking. Is Kirk taking no responsibility for the fact that this whole shitstorm started when HE was unfaithful to Spock. So what if Spock tried to make amend and changed his mind. Spock realized after Carol Marcus that he was changing because of Kirk's infidelities and didn't like what he was changing into. It made sense as hard as it was. And if he loved Spock SO much why then did he have 14 liaisons in three year. That was beyond excessive.