Date: 10/20/2014 12:18 PM Title: Never Let Me Go
An addictive story, i'm glad you're updating again on regular basis. I would like to know if Jim ,being a chalice, has ovary's as well? It would be logical, given the fact the virus rendered all women sterile. So they didn't produce egg cells, the reason why scientists modified some man. You see, i would prefere the future heir to be Jim's biological child. ;)Maybe after a first failed attempt with a donation from T'Pring, Jim finds out he's pregnant all the same, with Spocks child? Then of course he doesn't want to give up his baby. Sorry if my imagination goes to far but i'm really intrigued by your storyline! Love from Holland!
Thanks for the suggestion and it's a good idea. right now it won't work with whsat I'm doing, but I'll keep it in mind in case I have to switch course. Love from Iowa!
Date: 10/19/2014 4:27 PM Title: Never Let Me Go
you made Uhura deliciously bitchy, spoiled and ungrateful brat for someone who needs the surrogate process so she can marry/bond with her love! At the moment Spock is acting like a entitled jerk towards Jim so I guess Uhura and Spock go well together....I am glad that your Jim didn't fall for Spock at first sight. Looking forward to reading the next time Jim and Spock encounter each other.
Date: 10/19/2014 1:20 AM Title: Never Let Me Go
I love your pithy Jim and the expressions you come up with, "Woof woof good doggie. " brilliant. I cannot wait until Uhura realises that Spock has fallen for Jim. What a bind she has to have an heir otherwise I am sure that she would get rid of Jim. Now as for that heir and a spare..........
Date: 10/19/2014 1:10 AM Title: Never Let Me Go
Hmm, I can see you don't need to make Uhura bitchy, Spock will fill that role well enough for both of them! Poor Jim, Spock's treating him very poorly so far - luckily Sarek and Amanda have more manners.
Looking forward to more, thanks for the fast update.
Date: 10/19/2014 12:12 AM Title: Never Let Me Go
Great story so far! Spock being all snooty and making assumptions I see, silly vulcan :P
Can't wait for the rest!
I like it when Nyota's a decent person, actually. Or at least not a psycho bitch.
(Also, I'm really glad you aren't dead. I was getting kinda worried since I'd never noticed such a large update gap from you before, but I understand how life sort of pounces on you sometimes.)
Thank you, but I'm not dead. I've had some health issues, both physical and mental, but I'm back to as normal as I ever get, lol.
Date: 10/18/2014 11:07 PM Title: Never Let Me Go
It seems that Spock is the real prick (so far anyway) in this story. Who put the lirpa up his ass? The real mystery is what Uhura ever saw in him. The other characters are nice, though. Good to see Kirk eating and bathing and getting a decent wardrobe ... though tit's hard to imagine what he will do with 60 pairs of shoes. (Kirk as the Imelda Marcos of Vulcan?)
Date: 10/18/2014 10:38 PM Title: Never Let Me Go
Ooh, another of your excellent stories! As for the poll if you are still taking votes. Its simpler to dislike Uhura if she's unpleasant. However, it would be nice to see how you would do this without making Jim and Spock villains.
Date: 10/18/2014 10:24 PM Title: Never Let Me Go
More good stuff - Yummy.
I hope we will be getting some backstory on the Empire, please? I like my stories to be like a really good sandwich with lots of layers and pickles and veggies and chicken and turkey and stuff. ; . ).
Yes, there will be nmuch back story and fleshing out of all the scenery.