Date: 11/05/2011 6:15 PM Title: Aftertaste
"Are you sure you haven't been in love all along, Jim?"
"Only if he looked for it".
These Sentences were important in the story, and I was glad they were
"he felt a dampness on the floor from where his body secreted too much"
This vision of all was so delicious and stimulates ... I bit my lower lip to be Silent
"Hey, is everyone okay in there? I thought I heard a scream."
I Roared in laugh so big that stirred the people in the house.
I can not read that sentence without breaking into pieces of laugh
Date: 11/05/2011 5:03 PM Title: A Taste of the Exotic
Amazing how my mind worked along your story
Until a certain moment my mind all the time broadcast:
"Come on Jim, hurry up already...do not dare to be late..."
And a few moments later, it's:
"come on, someone will came on the door, press the buzzer, someone stop them!"
You know he's a virgin, and you do not love him (yet) do not do that to yourselves, to both of you!
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(a Sigh) This is the first time since I discovered this wonderful website, I wish Jim and Spock will not have sex (and I read hundreds of stories)
"Touch me, Jim. Everywhere."- Cracked me
"Everywhere, Jim." - Firer me to crumbs
I should love you. - I felt the need to cry for both of them
Date: 06/01/2011 2:54 PM Title: A Taste of the Exotic
WTHECK. Okay I'm officially pissed that this story does not have a full five star rating!! This story deserves more than a three and a half!! that's 70% and thats like a c-!! I SELDOM writr reviews but I can't bear the thought of one of my favorite stories of all time being undervalued... So here's a five star because you, my dear writer , damn well deserve it and I'm adding another five star review for good measure.
Date: 04/16/2011 1:38 PM Title: A Taste of the Exotic
I really like this story, but Spock deserves more. Maybe you could update it with a follow up where KirK realises he might loose Spock because someone else does love him and Spock wants more. Then it hits him that he can't live without him. A bit of competition for Spcok might be an interesting addendum to this nice ficlet.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading, and I'm glad you enjoyed! As for your comment, this story does have a sequel called "Aftertaste," and it more or less addresses the problem. It's posted below on my author page. :)
Date: 03/10/2011 9:04 AM Title: Aftertaste
Ah Spock has recovered, perhaps to Kirk's chagrin. It is relief that I see Spock accepting and coming to logical conclusions, even if based on erronous information. Sometimes you just want to kick him and Kirk in the head. LOL
But all's well that ends well. I love happy endings! Oh, they want to consider better sound proofing for executive quarters.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading, and I'm glad you enjoyed! Yes, Kirk needs a kick in the butt sometimes, and the shore leave planet is so convenient for that. XD
Date: 03/10/2011 8:59 AM Title: A Taste of the Exotic
Hmmm, the plot starts off in a familiar way, but the descriptions and action provides various aliens and humans of dubious associations. Spock appears rather OOC towards the middle and end, but it is obvious that is the result of the preceding events. I am way curious how this will work out for the two, so I am rush off to read the sequel. I hope all will be well. Why do I think Kirk is rowing down the river of denial.
Author's Response: Kirk has a yacht on the river of denial, with those frou-frou little drinks. :) Yes, I tried very hard to make Spock stay somewhat in character, but due to circumstances, he had to act...differently. I hope it's still believable, if odd, and thanks for reading!