Date: 01/14/2014 1:12 PM Title: Five: Hearing
(breathing deeply, exhale long)
This episode was the summit of Olympus.
In general, it was a profound experience to read your series.. again
Thank you a whole lot! It means much to me, and I'm sure also to athens7, that these stories resist time.
Date: 08/10/2013 11:08 PM Title: Three: Sight
I hate you. I absolutely hate you. This had me in tears, ohmygosh, your writing is so good. I am seriously running out of words to describe how much I love this series!
Oh, no, we didn't want to produce anything so catastrophic...
So you love the series and hate us. Oh well, scripta manent... =)
Date: 08/10/2013 10:53 PM Title: Two: Taste
This series is utterly aDORABLE!! You write both Spock and Kirk so well, and the odd little intimacies between them are so brilliantly in character... a hearty well done for this sense as well!
Thank you! Yes, athens7 writes a great Kirk =)
Date: 07/27/2012 12:55 PM Title: Five: Hearing
I love this little series. Thought I had better drop a review...you know, since I've read it a hundred times, lol.
My PC had just crashed when you left your review, it got somehow lost, and I only find it now...
Apologies for the delay, and a big *thank you*! You make my day.
Date: 12/10/2010 5:38 AM Title: One: Touch
<i>What’s the fuck just happened?</i>
Oh, I can't wait for them to find the answer to that!
Very interesting character study piece. I like the dual POV. The way they perceive each other, the insight into their respective psychology, and the slow evolution from thoughts to first real touch...oooh! And a touch that was undoubtedly very far from the clinical handshake Jim seemed to expect! When Spock touches, he TOUCHES: exploring each little detail, cataloguing it, breathing it in, memorizing in that phenomenal brain of his to remember until the end of times. And Jim retaliating in kind... really nice. And what a pleasure that this is only the first step of many! :-D I can't wait to read the rest...not tonight, unfortunately. But I'll be back for sure. :)
Thank you for your detailed, insightful review. I love it when a reader finds out something about a story that the author(s) themselves don't know =)I am especially proud of what you write about Spock!
I hope you are going to like the rest too.
Date: 12/09/2010 6:16 AM Title: Five: Hearing
Spock is Jim's truth, and Jim is Spock's logic. A beautiful ending to a beautiful series.
Truth and logic are two faces of a coin in this case. (Leibniz would love this).
Thank you for reading and for your detailed comments!
Date: 12/09/2010 6:12 AM Title: Four: Smell
“Do you desire to open a debate with him on the subject?”
*snort* That would be really awkward.
And Kirk's insecurity is so hurty... I hope the meld with Spock reassures him - even after they leave their oneness.
Fear can be even worse than pain. Easing a loved one's fear is the act of utmost loving. (just my opinion).