Date: 09/05/2016 3:35 AM Title: Pain
Quite enjoyed this little romp! Why is it marked as 'complete' when it's not? I assume it's not? It reads like a WIP?
I'm glad you enjoyed it. It's marked as complete because I write all my stories as one shots first and then if I get inspired to add to a story, I can; but if I don't the story can be read as an open ended complete story.
thanks for reviewing!
Date: 06/20/2016 1:57 AM Title: Pain
I'm sorry, but this doesn't sound like Spock to me. Spock has a great deal of respect for Jim Kirk AND he knows how frequently Jim gets hurt and how tough he is at going on despite pain. If Kirk complained of pain, Spock would take him seriously.
I think that the bond could well be extremely difficult for a human and could well cause headaches or all kinds of other symptoms. I think that's an interesting idea and one that could produce an interesting story! But I think Kirk and Spock would face that challenge as they face all challenges -- together.
Thats fine. It's a version of Spock that has communication issues and is working with a faulty hypothesis. Therefore, not one with which everyone enjoys or agrees. Thank you for taking time to review.
Date: 06/19/2016 9:18 PM Title: Pain
This is an interesting idea do you plan to run with it further?
I plan to make a series of one shots where things go wonky with Jim's and Spock's bond. I may return back to this one-shot's verse in the future as well.
Thanks for reviewing!